Achai comes

Achai cam into the large temple and looked around. He finally approached the Queen and bowed deeply, his mane and belly touching the floor. He closed his eyes, not looking at her. "My queen, I wish to ask something of you." he spoke strongly.

"what is it you ask for ?"i say allowing him(or her) to rise

Achai stayed in his bowed position, but he twitched when he heard a voice other than the queen's. "I wish for the Power of Immortality. And perhaps even, in time when I am more worthy of it, an Elemental Power." he said, his eyes still clamped shut.

"and what have you done to deserve it?"i siad wondering why he didnt look her in the eyes

Achai chuckled warmly, standing up slowly. He opened his eyes, their brown-color glowing with additional warmth. He smiled at her. "I suppose that is true. I haven't done anything spectacular to deserve it...but..." he said quietly.

"if you use it wisely i shall give you a gift"

Achai nodded slowly. "Would we still be talking of Immortality?"

"maybe"(hey on his bio it doesnt say the allience,i need to know so i dont get tricked)

Achai smiled. "Good."

OOC: oh....ok! i changed it.

Achai watched him, his expression suddenly serious. "Don't worry. If you allow me these powers, I won't use them for evil. You have my word." he said, bowing deeply.

nyx:
i appear next to luna and i stroke her hair and smile "hello, luna" i turn to the stallion and i look into his soul. "hello achai" i say, my eyes smiling

Achai's ears went back respectively as he heard the Queen's voice. "Hello, your Majesty. I've spoken with your subordinate, but I was hoping you would come." he told her.

i laughed in my chiming voice. "i am no queen. only your humble goddess, my child"
i bowed low enough to where my silky hair swept the marble floor.

Achai stared at her, surprised by her bow. Then his expression went back to normal and he smiled. "Alright. I've told your subordinate that I wanted the power of Immortality, and perhaps eventually an Elemental Power when I've trained my body." he said to her.

Jesper: I arrived. "I can train you son." I said as I folded my gigantic wings.

Myku: I nodded.

Achai looked surprised at him. "I didn't hear you come in, but yes, I would appreciate it if I had proper training. Thank you miss." he said, bowing deeply to her.

Jesper: I giggled. "Sorry son, teleportation. Now, follow me child. Or do you want to be teleported?" I asked as I went to the exit.
(Do you mean Achai?)

OOC: lol. yeah



Achai began walking to the exit. "It's alright. I will walk for now." he said, smiling. He lifted his tail and ran out of the temple.

Jesper: I smiled and lifted off, flying. "Follow me child." I said as I turned for Freedom Valley.

Myku: I let go of Jesper and started flying beside Achai.

i waved after the noble creatures and hoped with all of my heart that good would find them

Breaking dawn trotted in and saw Jesper

ooc: they left, dear lol

nyx:
i looked at the mare and smiled "why have you ventured to my temple, dearest?"

Well i am not sure. But i would like to be able to help the celitics when they need help.

nyx: i nod absently and a hardness enters my eyes "wouldnt we all....." i look back at her and say "would you like a battle form?"

yes please.